This is a little dark, but I think it makes a valid point. Life is short for everyone. Though I note it is much shorter for some than others. Enjoy. (Many thanks to Orel for his stunning photograph of my beloved Scotland.)
After I reread this a few times I thought, really all that is needed is the last stanza. It says it all.
We are standing on the precipice
Of where we started from
And looking over shoulders
At times so quickly gone
*
We’re holding onto memories
That should have long been thrown
Off the edge of sanity
To depth of pits unknown
*
And we can’t help but to carry
Those trinket’s — cherished wealth
Those times spent swimming wastelands
In days of strength and health
*
We look at youth and marvel
At the carefree joy we shared
But time swooped in and robbed the lot
And nothing strong was spared
*
We are standing on the precipice
Of what doubtless lies ahead
A polished box with knockers on
And earth itself our bed.





Jan 07, 2012 @ 12:39:26
Wonderful post!
Jan 07, 2012 @ 15:34:19
Thanks, but I sure wish I knew your name
Jan 07, 2012 @ 12:46:45
Wow! That’s awesome:) Thanks for sharing it with us.
Jan 07, 2012 @ 15:35:18
Thanks Angela, you’re a blessing and an inspiration in Christ.
Jan 07, 2012 @ 12:49:01
Exactly!! LIVE NOW! You are such a gifted, talented writer:)
Jan 07, 2012 @ 15:36:51
Becky, you are too kind. But I love that you see gifts and talents in my work. Thank you my dear friend. Still missing you!
Jan 07, 2012 @ 14:53:04
What an amazing poem! I’m very happy that you chose this picture to go with it. Again, you’re a brilliant poet.
Jan 07, 2012 @ 15:41:49
Orel, you also are too kind. This picture was perfect for what I want to convey. The fact that it was taken in Scotland tied in so well with the looking back to where I started from. So, once again, thank you my friend. You and your work are a wonderful blessing not only to me, but to so many others. WHEN that big coffee-table book of your work comes out I will be the first in line to buy one.
Jan 07, 2012 @ 16:34:50
This is so very profound Elizabeth. Thanks so much for sharing it with us – I love it!
Jan 07, 2012 @ 21:03:34
So insightful. A lot said with few words…a gift i do not have.
Jan 08, 2012 @ 00:24:11
Thanks Deanna, and Patricia.
Jan 08, 2012 @ 09:18:06
This is so true, Elizabeth. Thanks for sharing it.
Jan 08, 2012 @ 14:05:21
excellente dear sis and wonderful pictures of our homeland xxx
Jan 09, 2012 @ 22:40:12
What a wonderful poem! I’m so glad you stopped by my blog so I’d meet you and come to read it!
Jan 10, 2012 @ 00:01:31
Actually Jill, I stopped by your blog to sign-up for the free print
But LOVED all your wonderful artwork. You’re an awesome artist!
Thanks for coming by
Jan 11, 2012 @ 10:15:51
Sorry to comment here – I didn’t know where else to post this. I have a new blog address at http://www.alkimi1.wordpress.com. Thanks!
By the way, this poem was great. Really moving.
Jan 11, 2012 @ 17:26:18
Hey Alex, I didn’t know who was posting this
But I will remove your old link and add the new one